Touching her hand
making sure she cries
Checking her pulse
making sure she dies
Catching the blood
in a blackened vial
Midnight birth
of a vampire child
Now I’m a cripple
and now I’m old
Now even summer
is dark and cold
Giving a lecture
on staying alive
Praising the life
of a vampire child
Tall and strong
on his throne of bones
Keeping his kingdom
of blood and stones
Dust beaten up
by a leather wing
Hail to the night
and the Vampire King!
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It started out as random sentences and ended up as a vampire poem.
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  Ooh, dark. I like everything except the first stanza. I mean, the last four lines are awesome, but I really don't think the other ones fit in. Then again, that's just my opinion.
--  You might be on to something there, simply because I wrote the first four lines first, and didn't plan on them becoming a poem about vampires. So they might seem a little out of place. On the other hand I thought it was a little nifty to have a species of vampire that is born by normal women, who become their own children's first meal.
 --  Welcome, Sir, please come right this way. My apologies for the screams. Oh, silly me, I forgot! Shall I hang up your straightjacket? Hmm, didn't think of it like that. That thought is pretty cool...
 --  The first verse is really really nice, but it seemes like the three verses doesn't quite ... belong together?
Or maybe it's just me. -- Here comes the helicopter, they're always looking for me ... Life's short, so draw a giraffe! ~  My Stock Injin said something along the same lines, so I suppose I've done something wrong, and I'll admit that I wrote this over a long period of time and with quite different frames of mind. At the same time I'm quite happy with it, so editing it is not a priority. Thank you so much for the critisizm, though!
 -- Welcome, Sir, please come right this way. My apologies for the screams. Oh, silly me, I forgot! Shall I hang up your straightjacket? |
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